Challenge Accepted
For Paul and John's 47-Words Short Story Unofficial Challenge
By Sean A.Published about 6 hours ago • 1 min read
Ben kneeled, ”Dad, remember when you said that, even if I beat you to the finish line, benched more weight, or took your king, I’d never beat your age? I’m 47 now, so I win.”
Burying steel under marble, Ben whispered, “Warned you not to challenge me.”
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Thanks for the challenge!
About the Creator
Sean A.
A happy guy that tends to write a little cynically. Just my way of dealing with the world outside my joyous little bubble.


Comments (3)
Heavy hitting!
Phew. Being a dad isn't easy!
Dark. I like it.