
The glow was the first thing everyone checked in the morning—not the sun, which was unreliable and messy, but the steady, cool blue of the glass. Every home was a gallery of these illuminated rectangles, windows that offered a view far more curated and pleasing, than normal human optics could receive from the unfiltered world that hid behind everyone's' walls.
Kodie sat on the subway, his thumb hovering a precise half-inch above his portable window. To look at a person directly was to stare at what's behind a closed door; it was a breach of "privacy". In this world, the human face was merely raw material—an unfinished draft. Instead, Kodie looked through his device to see the woman sitting next to him.
Through the glass, her Personal Aura blossomed into existence. The software took her physical presence and overlaid it with a radiant, digital shimmer. Her skin was smoothed of every pore, her eyes were brightened to an impossible clarity, and a soft, golden light trailed her movements like a silken veil. This Aura was how everyone viewed one another; to look "eye to eye" in reality was considered an act of aggression, a voyeuristic intrusion into the unpolished and the private. You didn't look at a person; you looked at their broadcast.
Every citizen had the choice to set their Aura to either Public or Private. Those nearby could instantly pull up the profile of any Public image, flooding the viewer's screen with curated achievements and aesthetic highlights. While one could technically retreat into a Private setting, doing so severed the flow of Social Credits—the digital currency redeemed for high-tier synthetic meals, priority transit, and exclusive entertainment. To be Private was to be a ghost in a machine that only fed the visible. Consequently, almost everyone remained Public, trading the intimacy of their skin for the rewards of their glow.
The train car was silent, a communal dance of scrolling thumbs, until a sharp, electronic pop echoed through the cabin. Kodie’s window didn’t just go dark; it shivered. The cool blue interface fractured into jagged lines of static, and then, the light died completely.
Because his window was broken, his own Personal Aura vanished instantly. To the others in the car, he looked naked—a man in a gray coat with sallow skin and tired eyes. The woman next to him leaned away as if his lack of a digital signature was a contagious rot. Across the aisle, a man raised his own window and pointed the lens. Kodie saw his own unfiltered face appear on the man’s screen, framed by a flashing red "Anomaly" tag.
Kodie bolted at the next stop, fumbling with his device until the glass finally shivered back to life. He headed toward his office, but the entrance gate pulsed a stagnant, bruised purple. [ALERT: VISUAL DISCONTINUITY DETECTED]. His Social Credit Score was bleeding out. Desperate to stop the bleed, Kodie tapped the only option left: [ACCEPT #DEEPSTREAM].
Immediately, his window began to pulse in time with his heartbeat. His Personal Aura was no longer just a visual filter; it became a live heat map of his body and a graph of his pupil dilation. He was no longer a man; he was a broadcast. To mitigate his public scrutiny, and alleviate the loss of social credit; Kodie had to allow a complete and publicly transparent scan of how he was feeling; which subjected him to vile criticisms and wild accusations from a public of strangers. But, a restoration of Social Credits was far more important than peacefully regaining one's pride and mental status.
Weeks later, at the city’s extreme perimeter, while enjoying an afternoon in the park, he encountered a woman. She was of middle age, and conspicuously did not look upon the World, through a hand-held 3x5" digital window. No, this woman was feeding the birds and squirrels as she sat on a stone wall, her eyes were unmapped by any sensor. When the breadcrumbs and nuts were emptied from the bag she was holding, the out of place woman noticed Kodie, in his curiosity for her, and made her way to the bench he sat upon.
As this mysterious woman walked slowly passed Kodie, she whispered to him, "What you're looking for is not in there" she then extended her Henna tattooed hand and softly, with her fingers, grazed Kodie's window. When she touched his screen, she left a smudge of real, permanent human-ink. Kodie scrubbed it away for the cameras, to try and capture her as she walked away; but in his nervous state he was unable to capture her, before she disappeared quickly behind a dense line of trees. He reached down and picked up a small, discarded scrap of parchment she had dropped. It was heavy, textured, and stubbornly silent.
Back in the city, the "DeepStream" grew suffocating. The Window noticed his fascination with the scrap of paper. His device shrieked—a high-pitched, rhythmic chirp. [WARNING: SIGNAL DROPOUT]. In a crowded plaza, the system finally caught his secret. His account was terminated. The blue light of his device shattered on the pavement, and with it, his Personal Aura dissolved forever. He became a ghost—invisible to the masses whose eyes were glued to their windows.
Kodie turned and began to walk toward the perimeter, where he encountered the woman from the "Ink Era". As the pavement gave way to cracked dirt, he reached a cluster of timber and stone buildings. There were no neon interfaces here. He saw people sitting around a communal fire. The woman from the wall looked up. She didn't have a device. She didn't have an Aura. She just had a face. A normal, and beautiful in its unfiltered simplicity; Kodie thought to himself.
"You're late, Kodie," she said.
In the hours that followed his arrival, the hunger was the first thing he had to relearn. In the city, hunger was an icon—a nudge to redeem Social Credits for a nutrient-paste that tasted like "Spring Morning", and something to make a public spectacle of. Here, hunger was a hollow ache in his marrow that only softened after he engaged in the unglamorous physical labors of preparing a meal and eating it. He learned the value of a potato pulled from real dirt, caked in grit that didn't disappear with a swipe. It couldn't be exchanged for a "Like," and it didn't improve his standing, but it filled his belly, and kept the blood moving in his veins.
He learned the value of a secret. In the city, a thought unshared was a resource wasted. Here, he kept things in the dark corners of his mind, to bolster personal intrigue—like the way the evening mist felt on his neck, or the specific shape of a leaf on the tree next to him. These things had no market value here, and no one cared what mood they put Kodie in. They didn't boost his visibility. They were his alone, precious because they were untransmitted. Stored in his mind, to share later, when the time was right, or a personal exchange permitted.
Later that evening, he sat by the fire with the woman, who he came to know as Maddie. He looked at her, truly eye-to-eye, without the shimmering veil of an Aura. He saw the tattoes that covered the scars on her hands and the fatigue in her brow. In the city, this would have been a "Visual Error," a failure of the system. Here however, it was a map of a life lived. Something that if filtered away, would render out the true beauty.
"I used to think the Window was the only way to be seen," Kodie whispered, watching a spark from the flame drift upward into the sky towards the stars; until it was indistinguishable from them.
"The Window only shows what people want to buy, and what they are afraid to lose" she replied. "But things that are free... those are the only things you can't lose."
Kodie looked back at the distant, glowing hive of the city. He thought of his apartment, his synthetic meals, and the constant, buzzing validation of his Social Credit score. It felt like a fever dream that had finally broken. He reached out and took a sip of water from a tin cup. It was cold, metallic, and sharp. It wasn't "Premium Hydration." It was just water, and from God-knows-where; but he felt it refresh his soul.
He closed his eyes, leaning back against the rough bark of a tree. For the first time in his life, his heart rate was steady, not because a thousand strangers were watching it, but because he was finally at rest. He was unrendered, unindexed, and worth absolutely nothing to the world he had left behind.
He had never felt more substantial and alive.
About the Creator
Meko James
"We praise our leaders through echo chambers"



Comments (1)
This is brilliant and not so far-fetched 😬 great story