Sharp jaggedly cliffs
The blazing warm sun on me
Sound of ocean waves
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Blah blah blah, you say? Blah blah blah blah blah, I say Don't procrastinate! *** A/N: Blah Blah Blah Day is annually celebrated on 17th April. Your first thought may be "what kind of silly day is that?" Right? That's what I first thought. I was curious about this silliness, so I went on and did some reasearch on the history and meaning of 'blah blah blah' and even found some activities to celebrate the day. I was surprised! My Senryu is an attempt to illustrate this in a fun and concise way that we can all remember.
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Scones
Alright, let's not fuck about - here is what you need: Ingredients: 350g self raising flour 90g butter pinch of salt tsp of baking powder 3 tbsp caster sugar (or just normal white sugar would probably be fine) 175ml milk a squeeze of lemon a drop of vanilla an egg fresh strawberries, if they're in season Extra flour Even more flour Dried fruit (I consider this completely optional and usually leave it out)
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Love the use of “jaggedly,” so concrete and tangible. “The blazing warm sun” closes the haiku with a sense of peace and feeling the sun on one’s face. The second line is dramatic and it introduces water strongly but it also takes over the peace of the other two lines because of its length and choppiness (although the choppiness echoes the waves). The challenge would be to reduce that watery and airy emotion of the second line to 7 syllables like reducing a perfume to its core essence.