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Empty Eyes

A Poem About A World I’m Not A Part Of

By Alexander McEvoyPublished about 8 hours ago 1 min read
Empty Eyes
Photo by Timur Garifov on Unsplash

Empty smiles

Under empty eyes

Hopeless lusts

Pretty lies

Forget the world

The one outside

Forget the world

Its endless grind

Lose yourself

In my hopeless eyes

My empty smiles

My pretty lies

Forget my name

Before you ask

An empty name

A passing lane

For hours gone like fallen flowers

Petals wilted

Before mine have fallen

Buy me a drink

Watch me sink

Down to my knees

Feel the flutter

Of the bank’s drifting leaves

Hopeless lusts

Hidden underneath

My hollow smiles

And vacant eyes

The pretty lies

Hidden behind my empty eyes

heartbreakStream of ConsciousnessFree Verse

About the Creator

Alexander McEvoy

Writing has been a hobby of mine for years, so I'm just thrilled to be here! As for me, I love writing, dogs, and travel (only 1 continent left! Australia-.-)

"The man of many series" - Donna Fox

I hope you enjoy my madness

AI is not real art!

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  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarranabout 8 hours ago

    Oooo, the repetition certainly adds emphasis. So few words but so much depth to it. Loved it so much!

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