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Her Eyes or Her Eyes

A Universe Hidden in Your Eyes

By Syed Umar Published about 2 hours ago 1 min read

I do not what is more beautiful

The silence of dawn resting in your eyes

Or the setting sun reflected in them

The way they took at the stars

Or the way I see the stars in them

The way they wonder or the way they are home

The little curves where your eyes begin to laugh

Or the way they soften when sorrow less close

I do not now what is more beautiful

The light they carry

Or the shadow they hide

The way they close line the last line of a poem

Or in the way they open line an old book

The quite storm they hold back

Or the calm river they left flow

The way they wonder like a question

Or the way they answer without a sound

I do not know what is more beautiful

Your eyes or your eyes

Tell me what do your eyes hold for me?

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About the Creator

Syed Umar

"Author | Creative Writer

I craft heartfelt stories and thought-provoking articles from emotional romance and real-life reflections to fiction that lingers in the soul. Writing isn’t just my passion it’s how I connect, heal, and inspire.

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