Sundays aren't boring but are much of work!
Our housemaid must be giving us a wide smirk!
Today, I realized how much my house is vast...
Gosh! I have to do the cleaning fast
'Cause my dear house-maid rests this day
And we are obliged to do what Mom says
Still, there's two more rounds to dirty clothes
I and my sister are winding all the chores
"Please, make her come tomorrow" was all I prayed
I can't see you, where are you? I miss you my dear maid
Author's note :
I miss her so bad on Sundays. Today's the day.
I just wrote it in a quirky way. But I swear I miss her every Sunday.
About the Creator
Maryam Batool
Turned 18!
I'm a storyteller who loves poems, fiction, and romance. Creativity is my constant companion. I take joy in turning thoughts into worlds. Writing is my way of exploring life and connecting with others
Life's HARD, trust me! I'm already a little tired. But, I gotta live anyway!
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Comments (5)
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Aww! That's so heartwarming ❤️This poem is honestly so relatable! You've nailed the chaos of a chore-filled Sunday in such a funny way. I love how it goes from feeling a bit overwhelmed to missing your maid like a best friend—it’s such a quirky, true-to-life vibe! Sundays just aren’t the same without her, right?
"You are so kind, sister! I don't think anyone respects their maid this much; you are truly a very kind and good person. When your maid reads this, her eyes might fill with tears. A wonderful poem dedicated to someone special.💫💥👍✨
My maid is the best thing I have..a beautiful soul with no complains. Very creative and it touched my heart
Maids are hardworking people 😊😊