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in this thick air of the past

a Shakespearean sonnet

By Moon DesertPublished 4 years ago Updated 4 months ago 1 min read
Photo by Kinga Cichewicz on Unsplash

my windows bathe in the mornin’ sun daze

instantly brightenin’ my dusky thoughts

injectin’ a flash of comfort – bright juice

into my kaleidoscopic, clear eyes

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it feels like on a plane for the first time

I stare at the poster: blue, yellow smudge –

an advertisement of unearthly white

promise of an unforgettable feast

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words gathered from journals documented

all my past adventures and misjudgements

they don’t want be shushed with one gesture

aware of their worth in the writer’s hands

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I will arrange them all in soft phrases

once more for the sake of future dazed glare

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September 2022

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Thank you for reading!

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About the Creator

Moon Desert

UK-based

BA in Cultural Studies

Unsplash

Crime Fiction: Love

Poetry: Friend

Psychology: Salvation

“I write only because there is a voice within me that will not be still.” Sylvia Plath

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