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No longer a Child?

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By Gabriel ShamesPublished about 7 hours ago 1 min read
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When was the moment I was no longer a child?

There’s what the law says, there’s what family says… and then there’s what I say.

How I struggled to feed myself, to follow all the instructions, and failed to keep my room clean. That didn’t change until sometime around 29.

My parents called me a late-bloomer… someone who took longer to figure it out.

Some of my friends and partners called me a slob.

I would say it’s embarrassing, even in retrospect. But not anymore.

How can I be embarrassed about what made me me? It’s about learning, isn’t it?

The me that I am could be different from moment to moment.

But the me in the next moment wouldn’t exist without the previous one.

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About the Creator

Gabriel Shames

I’m an east coast American, interested in writing poetry and fiction as long as I can remember. I took a test in 4th grade where they told me I wrote creatively at a college level!

Hope you enjoy reading as much I as I do creating ❣️

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