With each step forward,
I become more out of breath—
Out of breath and time.
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With each step forward,
I become more out of breath—
Out of breath and time.
More stories from Anthony Bryan Riva and writers in Poets and other communities.
Comments (3)
The final line landed softly but stayed heavy. It felt less like regret and more like awareness, which made it resonate.
Nice job.
You've captured that feeling of racing against time.