Sweat streams off my skin
As my body releases
What’s no longer mine
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Her heart was made of liquid sunsets 🌅 - Virginia Woolf
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Whoaaaa, this was so freaking deep! Awesomeeee Haiku!
I've never really liked saunas. But the idea of sweat as releasing that which is no longer mine, I like that. A lot.
Oh yes. So good! Physical/mental sweat. Great haiku! 💫💞
Great haiku
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Comments (4)
Whoaaaa, this was so freaking deep! Awesomeeee Haiku!
I've never really liked saunas. But the idea of sweat as releasing that which is no longer mine, I like that. A lot.
Oh yes. So good! Physical/mental sweat. Great haiku! 💫💞
Great haiku