you can't see the rose
when you're first planting the seed
give it time, keep on
How does it work?
Nice
Great Haiku!
Yes, everything takes time. Loved your Haiku!
Great analogy for life. Good job!😊
I love the message here. So true! Your work is so honest and lovely.
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Comments (5)
Nice
Great Haiku!
Yes, everything takes time. Loved your Haiku!
Great analogy for life. Good job!😊
I love the message here. So true! Your work is so honest and lovely.