you’re still my Popee
I’ll be your Kedamono
Love, so fresh, citrus
My work:
Patheos,
The Job, The Space Between Us, Green,
The Unlikely Bounty, Straight Love, The Heart Factory, The Half Paper Moon, I am Bexley and Atonement by JMS Books
Silent Bites by Eukalypto
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Hey there, I just read your poem and I have to say, it's really great! The way you play with words and use vivid imagery really draws the reader in and makes them feel like they're right there in the moment with you. Your writing has a certain rhythm and flow that's just mesmerizing. I can tell you put a lot of heart and soul into this piece, and it definitely shows. Speaking of poetry, I just published a new piece myself that I think you might enjoy. It's a bit different from what you've written here, but I think you'll appreciate the emotional depth and honesty that I've tried to convey. Check it out and let me know what you think - I always love getting feedback from other poets! https://shein-fashion-discovery.top/poets/love-s-lyrical-journey%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E%3C/p%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3Cstyle data-emotion-css="w4qknv-Replies">.css-w4qknv-Replies{display:grid;gap:1.5rem;}
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Hey there, I just read your poem and I have to say, it's really great! The way you play with words and use vivid imagery really draws the reader in and makes them feel like they're right there in the moment with you. Your writing has a certain rhythm and flow that's just mesmerizing. I can tell you put a lot of heart and soul into this piece, and it definitely shows. Speaking of poetry, I just published a new piece myself that I think you might enjoy. It's a bit different from what you've written here, but I think you'll appreciate the emotional depth and honesty that I've tried to convey. Check it out and let me know what you think - I always love getting feedback from other poets! https://shein-fashion-discovery.top/poets/love-s-lyrical-journey%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E%3C/p%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3Cstyle data-emotion-css="w4qknv-Replies">.css-w4qknv-Replies{display:grid;gap:1.5rem;}