You’d never presume to tell a river it can water only one tree,
has to choose wisely and stay there,
become a lake supporting boats, maybe just a pond, or worst of all,
a vast, shiny puddle obscuring a pothole, a shallow jagged one
that damn near tears your wheel off the axle,
knocking your front end out of alignment,
the sediment from beneath rising, the gloss disturbed, becoming muddy when the dirt
swirls into the surface. Doesn’t take long—no depth to navigate.
Maybe that pothole was born of ice, or maybe, just maybe,
that river-fed tree kicked up its roots,
knocking a hole in that asphalt smothering it,
and when the rain fell, it drank its fill,
leaving a pitfall of destruction
for anyone who forgets
when to swerve.
Meanwhile, the river flows,
feeding the trees.
About the Creator
Harper Lewis
I'm a subversive weirdo nerd witch who loves rocks. Intrusive rhyme bothers me. Some of my fiction may have provoked divorce proceedings in another state.😈
My words are mine. Suggest ai use and get eviscerated.
MA English literature, CofC



Comments (2)
We have so many potholes here in TN that they are trying to pass a bill Pot for potholes. Where it would be legal to sell cannabis and the roads would be fixed from the sales of it. Great poem, and I am with what Paul said, it doesn't need anything else. Perfect the way it is.
I think this is just brilliant the way it is, but that's just me. I mean, so much is said here in such a beautiful way. I love when trees and rivers have the final say! You just have such a grip on form and words. I could see reading this in a poem anthology and not doubting at all why it's there.