Art

Another Door
A gray door that says "Open me." What is there here for all to see there? (I believe that I am getting the hang of writing haikus. Also, I think I got the syllable count for the whole haiku as well as each of lines. Please read and comment for it is really appreciated.)
By Mark Graham2 years ago in Critique
Doors
A garden door opens to a garden of friends that grow up and down. (Here is another haiku about a particular door to a secret garden. I believe that I have the syllable count right for this one. Hope you like this one and please comment after you read this one.)
By Mark Graham2 years ago in Critique
The Best Apple Watch To Buy Right Now
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By jay2 years ago in Critique
Babies
Full of wandering Plenty of hugs abound with Babies are family. (Here is another haiku. Again, I feel that maybe the word 'hugs' is either one or two syllables. 'Family' is two syllables to me. I divided 'fam/ily' like this making it two syllables or could be three 'fam/i/ly'. 'Wan/der/ing' like this giving three syllables. Please comment it will be greatly appreciated.)
By Mark Graham2 years ago in Critique
Windows
Hey, eyes wide open vision clear not blurry now Windows to a view. ______ windows (pexels.com) A window down low Go down and look up and open
By Mark Graham2 years ago in Critique
Thunderstorm
Dark clouds are brewing Winds at high speeds now howling Thunderstorms to engage. (One last haiku for tonight. I think they are getting a little better, I hope. My inspiration for this one was I was hearing thunder outside as well as the dark, gray clouds and sky. Please comment if you want to.)
By Mark Graham2 years ago in Critique
Rainbows
Rainbows of color all all red, yellow, orange, green, blue now after a rain. (I believe I described a basic rainbow. Also, I do believe I have the 5, 7, 5 pattern of a proper haiku. I had these ideas, and I wanted to get them down before they left me never to return. Hope you read and comment.)
By Mark Graham2 years ago in Critique
The Family
Family is caring and loving persons always together. (Another haiku for analysis and I think I am improving even just a little bit. I know that I need work. Does anybody know a good book on how to write these poems better. Let me know if possible. Thank you.)
By Mark Graham2 years ago in Critique
A Bedroom
A place to bring a sense of solitude and peace a place to rest. (I think I am doing a little better on the writing of haiku, but I know I need practice. So, when I write more haikus please read and share your thoughts on them if you wouldn't mind. Thank you in advance.)
By Mark Graham2 years ago in Critique
Hot and Humid
Hot and humid day In Louisiana, again When will it get cold. (Here is another try at my writing a haiku. I think it is a little better. I do want all the suggestions I can get to help me improve in writing this kind of poem. I would really appreciate any help.)
By Mark Graham2 years ago in Critique
Book
An open book, Pages that we write and read. become a friend. (I tried to write a haiku for it has not been since junior high when I learned how to write these kinds of poems. I hope I am close. Let me know and leave a comment truly appreciated.)
By Mark Graham2 years ago in Critique
Barrier Between Us
Do you ever think that how much our life would be easy if all of us would speak only one language and if there would be only one language all around the world. There would be no language barrier while we communicate to each other because all of us could speak easily to anyone and everyone, the reason would be that we would have only one language. But instead of having one and only one language all around the world we have many and different languages and because of this there are many problems which we face.
By WALL_E2 years ago in Critique